Those chords!!! Gorgeous man!!!
Those chords!!! Gorgeous man!!!
Woah this has a really nice vibe
thanks!
You've really come such a long way. That second climactic section is absolutely magnificent. You're gonna do insane things in the future man <3
DUDE.
HOLY SHIT.
Everything about this is absolutely stellar. I cannot think of a single criticism, except MAYBE a bit of muddy mixing in some parts, but that's bound to happen with a track like this. The vocals, the chanting, the atmosphere, I cannot describe how glad I am that I decided to review some tracks on the Audio Portal at exactly this point in time. I'd ask to collab but I'd just undermine your talent.
Absolutely phenomenal dude. So excited to hear where you go from this. <3
Wow, thanks dude! Means a lot to me, and who knows, we might collab sometime :)
Duuuuude that's real nice
hey thanks man, appreciate it <3
Hey! Nice track you’ve got here :) I’ve got some feedback for you, hope you don’t mind.
Firstly you have the intro, with the strings and the Xtrullor - Ichor-esque piano. First tip: REVERB. Your mix is generally pretty dry, which isn’t always a bad thing, but you kind of want those strings and piano to have an ambient effect and sustain more. Don’t be afraid to drench that piano in reverb and delay.
Something else I’m noticing in this track is a significant lack of bass. Rule of thumb in pretty much any track, you’ve gotta have bass. And ESPECIALLY in dubstep, you’ve gotta have sub-bass (bass below 60hz). For the sub-bass, I’d just use a simple sine wave. The drops aren’t really lacking bass, but the other sections like the build up could really use like a bass pad. You could also use a double bass VST, or if you want it to be a bit more intense, you could distort some stuff and make a gritty bass. Make sure to EQ it all.
As far as composition is concerned, your melodies are pretty nice! I especially like your use of percussion, I thought you did a great job with that. My one gripe is what you did in the drops. For instance, at 1:20, you have a brief interlude from the drop, but instead of putting a little melody in there, you just have one note playing for two bars. I’m also not really a fan of the extra bar at 1:30, I feel like it throws things off. Generally I’d just avoid holding sounds for a bar with no movement or automation, cause it feels like you just threw a sound in and didn’t really bother to do anything interesting with it.
The sound design is mostly great! I LOVE that riddim/deathstep sound at 1:24, and your drops are pretty cool! I feel like they could be a bit more cohesive, but the rhythms are satisfying to listen to. One thing that I feel you could improve is that gritty riser/faller sound, like at 1:16. Idk why but it just hits my ears the wrong way. Maybe not as much pitch bending would make it better? Overall when you’re making dubstep drops you want everything to flow well, and for everything to sound clean and crisp.
One last thing I’ll comment on is your buildups. You’ve got these major drops, but you don’t seem to really be building up the tension. Don’t be afraid to go all out! You’ve got some drums building up and a riser right now. You could add some white noise, fade in some sounds, add more risers- this may sound like a lot but when you’ve got a huge drop like that, the best way to pull it off is to build up a shit ton of tension before it, so that when the drop hits, all that tension releases and you get a crazy rush. So I’d work on that for the future.
Overall, I like what you’ve done here! If you have any questions feel free to pm me. You’ve earned a follow :D
Nice job!
Ok so normally I put a Triangle waveform detuned by -2 octaves, and a LOT of distortion on it... but I Completely forgot that...
So yeah, no sub bass... but thanks
That second drop is otherworldly. Fantastic job man
Dude this is great!!! You’ve really got ambient music down :D
See THIS is how you make drumstep. Although you've improved a LOT since 2016, this track is still gold <3
Composer, producer, vocalist, multi-instrumentalist and songwriter | channeling reverie | aka Echorift
Age 20, Male
Canada
Joined on 6/19/18