Goddamn that metal section holy shit. Amazing take on an amazing song
Goddamn that metal section holy shit. Amazing take on an amazing song
I think you're on the right track here, the production is pretty clean so good job with that :) though I think you need to work on some things. Your melodic sections are really empty, some bass, a moving rhythm, and some chords in the background could really help you out a lot. The drops sound pretty good but I think you're using that roaring bass WAYYY too much. It doesn't really help that it's a pretty static sound, and that it's just playing quarter notes. I'd really consider taking the extra step to design sounds with a lot of movement, as well as creating more interesting drop rhythms. Other than that though this is cool!
Thanks for the feedback! also, a LOT of people have said this about my basses and i'm working on improving.
The ideas are all good, but the mixing feels really wet which for me is taking away some of the power in the drop. It's pretty cool tho!
I don't think it's that wet.
i can see that, thanks
Not bad, tho it’s a little overwhelming with the volume at parts. I totally see where you’re getting at with this tho, keep up the good work!
Thanks c:
Most of it is great but dude that electric guitar is WAYYY too loud and distorted.
Agreed... Besides from it being disorted, I kind of like it that way.
I'm liking the composition and ambiance but in the drop I'm finding your kick and snare are really thin, especially your snare. When making DnB I'd suggest choosing a more impactful snare sample, and a thicker kick. I also recommend using lots of auxiliary percussion like hi hats playing a fast, syncopated rhythm to really drive across that "fast" feel. Lastly in general I feel like the track as a whole needs some more sub bass. Overall I like the feel you were going for but there's some work needed to make the drops more interesting.
My god this composition is just chilling... really nice job!
This is really pretty dude! Nice job :D
My thanks for the kind words. I'm glad people seem to enjoy this one. 'Twas somewhat daunting to put it out there, but I'm glad it seems to have paid off. :)
You've got insane talent man.
Composer, producer, vocalist, multi-instrumentalist and songwriter | channeling reverie | aka Echorift
Age 20, Male
Canada
Joined on 6/19/18